Victory's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wedge, Much 2.0]

Good art, needs sound.

This is great visually - your drawing skills are up to scratch, and you got things like the font right (which can often be a bad beginners' mistake). But this is really really lacking in one area.

IT NEEDS SOUND!

Without sound, the humour just goes right off. Add some background music definitely; I'd recommend putting something in that fits, rather than a piece of music that you personally like (ie. putting heavy metal or club techno into this just wouldn't ever work!). You might also want to consider voice acting, such as a narrator, or sound effects, like explosions going off in the Vietnam scene. This can be improved so easily, good luck.

[CapnCrunchDaPimp]

Wacky Wacky Wacky

Your voice is like Jerry Jackson's. ;3

This was fantastic, make moar.

Mechabloby responds:

Mechabloby says:
I feel like a mix between Jerry Jackson and StrawberryClock.
Mechabloby says:
My flashes are shittily animated but people Love it.

Copy pasta is tastyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy. =)

[Hewoes]

Very, very good.

Hilarious! Fantastic parody. I really liked your drawing style as well. Well done, I can't find any faults with this. 10/10

[The Beginners Tutorial]

Fucking crap.

Go learn how to design anything before you start telling everyone else how to. Disgusting gradient backgrounds, the worst font in the world, text you can't make out... A tutorial should be perfect in every way if you are teaching someone something. And this is terrible. YOU should go read more tutorials.

[asimo]

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Wow, you can import videos that you didn't make into Flash! Want a gold star?

[Black&White fbf collab 3]

No more clogging up the flash forum...

Just joking :P Very well done guys, really much better than the last two. Some of them were awesome. I might be in the fourth ;D

[Baron von Brunk vs. SAW 2]

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Nice one, pretty funny. Though I think at the end it should of been 'Saw Wars' instead of 'Saw in Space'.

[Madness Unbreakable 2]

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Nice Madness Flash. I can see you put some real effort into this, and it turned out pretty good. Needed a lot more killings and to be faster next time though. You really need to fix the preloader though; I had to right-click and press Play to get it to work. 3.5/5.

hollowbullet responds:

Ok I fixed it now Sorry it took this long I'm new with preloaders and thans for the review.

[no valentine]

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I loved the overall mood of this Flash. It's probably the music. Very mellow. I liked the frame by frame animation as well. I gave you 5.

george-kelly-johnson responds:

thank you

[Valentine '29]

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Tremendous. This was utterly brilliant. Animation was smooth and perfect (Adam-Phillips-level on a few of them) the voice acting COULDN'T of been better, the storyline was fantastic... 10/10.